agar main ghalat nahi to iqbal ka hi ye bhi sher hai- "Ghalib sharab piine de maszid mein baith kar varna aisi jagah bata, jaha khuda nahin. galatiya meter, matra, qafiye ki ho sakti hai. ustad ka kam hota hai, use sudhar dena.
aapka poocchna sahi hai. kisine May mein blog banana sikha diya, uske baad kautoohal vash likhta raha, jab utsukta shaant hui tab blog bhi kinare ho gaya. lekin ab aapki is tippani ke baad phir se likhna shuru karoonga. dhanyavaad.
agar main ghalat nahi to iqbal ka hi ye bhi sher hai-
ReplyDelete"Ghalib sharab piine de maszid mein baith kar
varna aisi jagah bata, jaha khuda nahin.
galatiya meter, matra, qafiye ki ho sakti hai. ustad ka kam hota hai, use sudhar dena.
hamein nahin pata ki ye Iqbal ka hai ya nahin, par sher bemisaal hai.
ReplyDeleteto fir kya ye ghalib ka hi to nahi?
ReplyDeleteaap kyaa sirf 'May' maheene mein hee blog likhate hain ?
ReplyDeleteaapka poocchna sahi hai. kisine May mein blog banana sikha diya, uske baad kautoohal vash likhta raha, jab utsukta shaant hui tab blog bhi kinare ho gaya. lekin ab aapki is tippani ke baad phir se likhna shuru karoonga. dhanyavaad.
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